Here is one of my old writing that I was thinking That I need to improve.
I've put somethings wrong in the wrong places.
Now I am going to show you one of my good writing.
Mum made the children a cup of hot chocolate. Danny and Ella ran to the trampoline. The nurse put a plaster cast on Ella’s arm.Danny jumped up high and landed on Ella’s arm.Mum drove Ella and Danny to the hospital.
I really liked this writing because it makes sense and i have used punctuation for this.
